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Project 2: Experiments with mark making

Set up a reasonably large still life, for example two or three chairs piled together.  Make yourself some drawing tools by attaching pencils or pieces of charcoal to the ends of bamboo canes or similar.  Place a large sheet of paper on the floor and try to draw your subject using these super-elongated pencils.  You’ll have less control but you may find that little movements you make have big results as they are magnified by the canes.  This will lead to a very sensitive responsive mark. 

With my tutors words still in my ear from Assignment 2; ‘Look around you and find things to draw instead of setting up a still life’, I looked around and saw a large vase with drooping sun flowers.  I attached a piece of charcoal to the bamboo cane, which was 125cm long and had a wee try out on a piece of white paper.

I only made a few marks and the charcoal was difficult to control, but the marks were interesting; a bit like calligraphy or Japanese symbols.

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I knew I needed a large piece of paper to draw on and found a large sheet of cardboard.  I didn’t move the vase but left it where it was.  I drew the vase and the wall in the background.  I found it difficult to draw the straight lines of the vase and get the angles of the skirting board right, because your focus is on trying to control the charcoal.  I enjoyed doing the scribbly marks for the withering sunflower petals.  The result was okay.  I liked the strong confident lines of the stems of the flowers.

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Charcoal on grey cardboard 45cm x 60cm

As a second stage, if you like to add colour, grab a handful of wax crayons, pastels or pens for each colour.  Hold them with your fist and draw with them all at the same time. 

I used soft pastels.  I don’t have a huge amount of colours, so used 3 for each colour, trying to be as loose as possible, and leaving the grey of the card board for the lighter tones.

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Charcoal & pastel 45cm x 60cm grey cardboard

I made another attempt using an old paper sack to draw on.  I used the same method with charcoal.

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Charcoal on brown paper 40cm x 80cm

It occurred to me that I should experiment with the length of the stick, so I chopped it in half (about 65cm).  Using the roses from the previous assignment as a reference I did the following;

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Charcoal on lining paper 45cm x 60cm

I stood to do these with the paper on the floor.  The lack of control meant that some of the lines were bold and sweeping, whilst others were faint and barely there.  I still managed to make strong, bold strokes.

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Charcoal on lining paper 45cm x 60cm

Again, following my tutor’s advice; ‘Try as much as possible, to link the exercises to the Parallel Project’, I did a further two drawings.  I worked from photographs, cropped to make the compositions more interesting.  I was attracted by the patterns, tones and shadows.  The lack of control when using the charcoal on the cane, left no room for fussiness or precision but forced me to be decisive, resulting in some strong mark making, particularly in the dark shadows.  I am pleased with the end result.  It has a confidence to it, lacking in my previous work.  It has an abstract feel and the use of the cane I feel, adds something.  It is an interesting composition, which focusses on line, pattern and tone and is unconcerned with subject.

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I began this drawing with the charcoal attached to the bamboo cane again, however I had no thick pieces of charcoal left, so taped several thin sticks together.  I used thick pieces of masking tape for the vertical lines.  I then drew with the charcoal.  The thin pieces taped together gave a scribbly effect.  Once I had removed the masking tape I made a circular template with card board and used blue pastel with this, trying to keep it slightly loose and imperfect.  Changing the direction of the hatching kept it from looking too tidy.  I then went over the chair shape in the foreground with black charcoal.  I was pleased with elements from the finished piece; I really like the blue circles and straight vertical lines of the blinds, but I feel the composition needs more work and can be developed further.

Reflection: What happens when you break the relationship between your brain and the marks you make in this way?  Are these simply bad drawings – or do they point the way to a kind of responsiveness within the act of mark-making which enables a more sensitive and ultimately more informative line?  This is a loaded question, but respond with your own views and reflections based on what you’ve learned so far.

Placing a length of cane between the charcoal and your hand results in a loss of control and you automatically over compensate by using more force.  Rather than be a hindrance, it brought a looseness to my drawings and gave them more of a ‘sketchy’ feel.  I once saw the paint brushes of James McNeill Whistler at the Hunterian Art Gallery and these had exceptionally long handles, useful I would imagine, for the huge canvases he worked on, but in addition would add a looseness in the application of paint.  The first drawing I did of the sunflowers, before I added colour, was more sensitively drawn because of the cane.  It was more expressive and impressionistic.  Using more force than you would usually exaggerates the line and in the page with the roses above I was able to get into a rhythm almost, when rendering the concentric circles.

 

Project 1: Drawing blind

Choose a smallish object you know well, preferably something with a fairly distinctive shape….Reach out for your object and feel it; as you do this, make a record of what you feel on your sketch pad with your pencil….Make several studies until you feel that you’ve arrived at something interesting.

I had a look around the room and decided to try drawing a hair brush and hair clip.  The results were disappointing, I think because the shape is so familiar, I don’t think I was drawing what I felt, but what I knew a brush looked like.

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Pencil in A3 sketchbook

Next I tried a small jug.  First I tried using pencil as the brief suggested.   The results were better I think, because I was trying to record the shape I felt, rather than how I knew the jug looked.

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Pencil in A3 sketchbook

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Charcoal in A3 sketchbook

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Soft pastels in A3 sketchbook

On looking at these, I could see that I was still drawing the vase from memory, and not from touch.  So I sat with it in my hands for a good 15, 20 minutes, just running my hands over the surface and feeling the curves of the handle, neck and base and the smooth cold surface of the ceramic. Once I had examined it thoroughly by touch I then tried drawing it again in pencil.

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Pencil in A3 sketchbook

I was more pleased with this result; it seemed to be a more honest rendition.  My pencil lines were more assured.  Working from two planes, i.e. drawing the circle of the neck from above and the profile from the side describes the jug more honestly than my previous attempts.

Next I tried using black drawing pen as it gives a stronger, confident and more defined line with less room for hesitancy.

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Black Pitt pen in A3 sketchbook

To a certain extent, these remind me of the Cubists, or Ben Nicholson’s etchings.

 

three goblets 1967 Ben Nicholson OM 1894-1982 Purchased 1976 http://www.tate.org.uk/art/work/P07204

three goblets 1967 Ben Nicholson

Rafael 1967 Ben Nicholson OM 1894-1982 Presented by the artist 1968 http://www.tate.org.uk/art/work/P02015

Rafael 1967 Ben Nicholson

 

Following the suggestion of ‘Drawing Projects’ I decided to try a self-portrait by touch only and the results were interesting.

“Your drawing should show a sensitive response to touch and contain a range of interesting felt marks.  What is important in this drawing is the synchronised route of communication being made between the two hands, and the transfer and coding of one sort of information (touch), into another (visible marks).” (Maslen and Southern, 2014:88)

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Black Pitt pen in A3 sketchbook 

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The attempt above was done using two colours of felt pen and was interesting because I did it first in green then picked up the pink, looked at the paper and positioned the pen on the nose where I’d started with the green, then closed my eyes.  The pink lines are in the same position as the green, despite having my eyes shut.

Reflection: How far were you recording the sensation and the act of touching, and how far were you trying to use touch as a replacement for sight? 

It was initially very difficult for me to draw from the sensation of touch only.  I automatically reverted to drawing from memory.  Touch can give an idea of shape and form, but your finger tips can only touch one area of an object at a time, and it is difficult to gauge where one part is in relation to another.  You also have no idea of colour or tone.  One advantage however, is that to compensate for the lack of information, the hand that is holding the media to record the sensations of the other, becomes very sensitive in its endeavour to form an image with very little information.  The results can be economic, but effective.  The resulting drawing is almost a distilled image, where a rendition of the shape and form are explained satisfactorily, without the unnecessary details such as colour.

 

Drawing with experimental media

Over the next few weeks you’ll experiment extensively to build up your sensitivity to the properties of materials.  Use your sketchbook and supplementary sheets to collect information about materials and what you can use to draw with.  Push forward your experiments by using the new methods you discover to make fuller drawings.  Use a new technique randomly scribbling a square, for example can help you see it’s potential, but using it to complete a task pushes you to learn more actively by solving any problems you encounter along the way.

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These drawings were done using a stick with mud for the tree,  rubbing daffodil petals on the paper for the flowers and rubbing blades of grass onto the paper for, well, the grass.  It was a lot of effort for very little result (as well as a lot of strange looks in the park).

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This was done in a similar way with tulip petals and leaves, with a similar, disappointing result.

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This was done using different coloured mail varnishes on black paper.  Quite a nice result and one I may try again.

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This was done with Typex correction fluid on brown parcel paper.

Aim: When you think of drawing, what’s the first thing that comes into your mind?  We might initially think of pencils and maybe a Renaissance masterpiece.  In fact pencils are quite a modern invention and most Renaissance drawings were done with a stick of silver and a pot of ink.  Your sketchbook should be filling up with drawings in a variety of media by now, but for this project you’ll extend that exploration even further. 

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Contextual focus point: Cornelia Parker

 

Research the work of Cornelia Parker.  Make notes in your own words in response to the following:

What do you think Parker is trying to do in her piece Poison and Antidote Drawing (2010)?

Poison and Antidote Drawing is created using rattlesnake venom and black ink, anti-venom and white ink.  Parker often uses bits of her subject to make her art work.  Why do you think she does this?

‘ I’ve made poison and antidote drawings using snake venom from a rattlesnake farm in Texas mixed with black ink, and anti-venom with white ink, to make Rorschach blots.  The resulting drawings are a combination of ‘good and evil’.’ (Maslen and Southern, 2014:54)

She goes on to say ‘For me the concious part of making a drawing is deciding on a process, what the process then releases is something else.’

I think she has tried to create more than just a representation of an object, but instead the drawing is the object.  The title ‘Good and Evil’ itself conjures up a lot of ideas and the use of black and white ink emphasises this.  The positive and negative concepts are polar opposites of each other.

How do you think it feels to stand in the presence of art works that are constructed from original objects  of great cultural significance?  How does that differ from, say, standing in front of a painting of the same object?

Initially I thought it was a little self-indulgent.  I wonder if a drawing or painting should be a successful piece of art in its own right without there having to be an explanation of the process or of materials used.  I’ve pondered over this and decided the media and materials can give an art work a deeper meaning, which engages the viewer’s imagination and empowers and strengthens the artwork itself.

Bibliography

Maslen Mick and Southern Jack

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Drawing Projects; and exploration of the language of drawing

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Black Dog Publishing

Project 2: Mark making materials

Build up a variety of surfaces using whatever comes to hand that has two differently coloured layers.  Make several drawings by scratching through the second layer.  You can use wax and acrylic paint, oil glazes on board, household paint on wood, varnish on metal.  Vary the scale of drawings depending on your support.  Choose a subject from your sketchbook or learning log and push through to make complete drawings, not just squares of texture with random marks.  That way you’ll really learn what the materials can do.

This immediately made me think of the pictures children make by covering a sheet of paper with coloured wax crayon, covering it all with black crayon, then scraping off the black, usually drawing fireworks.  So that is exactly what I did first.

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For my next one I was thinking that I would leave the circular area around the tree white, then have the surrounding area blue.  I had done a watercolour painting like this previously.  I used black oil pastel, instead of wax crayon to get better coverage.  Unfortunately the black oil pastel stained the white paper and scraping it only exacerbated the problem, so there is too little contrast between the black and the tree.

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For my next one I used white oil pastel and light and dark blue for a kind of sky effect, again using black oil pastel.

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I decided to try different media, so for the next one I covered the paper with different colours of acrylic paint.  Once dry I covered with black oils pastel and again scraped off.  This gave quite a subdued effect, as I think the black oil pastel stained the acrylic paint, but I think it gives a mysterious atmosphere to it.

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Next I covered the paper with black oil pastel the painted over it with acrylic paint, then scraping the paint to draw the tree.

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This worked really well, the strong colours of the acrylic contrast well with the black.

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This one was done with coloured wax crayons below and white acrylic paint on top, scraped off whist still slightly wet.

Part 2: Research point, mark making

 

Mark making may seem like play, but if you have any doubts about the validity of this kind of exercise, take a close look at some great masters of the past. … Many artists will have an old pot scourer, toothpick or hat pin in their tool box which they have learned over the years makes a certain kind of mark.  Next time you are in a gallery pay special attention to the variety of marks used and note your discoveries in your learning log… Try doing this with the drawings below.

Two thatched Cottages with Figures at the window, Rembrandt

I hadn’t used the zoom in facility on the Bridgeman site before, so this was quite interesting for me to try.  This is a line drawing using pen and brown ink.  The range of mark making in this drawing is quite amazing.  There is a wide range of thin and thick marks, all used with varying degrees of pressure and changing direction all the time.  The thatched roof, for example has quite strong, deliberate marks, all going in the one direction, with squiggles for the ends of the sheathes.  The wood of the barn has fine cross-hatching and the foreground has very loose lines describing the land.  Put all together it is a lively sketch, but which has substance and describes the scene wonderfully.

The Raising of Lazarus, Caravaggio

In contrast, this is a tonal drawing rendered using pen and brown india ink and black chalk on brown paper.  This has a fantastic depth to it and it is fascinating to examine up close enough to see it is all made up with lines.  The buildings in the back ground really appear to be in the distance by the use of aerial perspective, while the figures in the foreground really come forward, where the tones are stronger. Their clothes are drawn with fine lines all going in the direction of the folds and creases. The craggy face of the mountain behind them is described with contour lines and the detail in the foreground is described by the use of fine lines for the grass.

Looking at this has made me more aware of how marks are made and has made me want to get right up close to paintings and drawings in galleries.  For example on the OCA Study Visit to the Two Roberts Exhibition, several of the paintings had marks made which appeared to be scratched on.  An example of this is ‘Weaving Army Cloth’ by Robert Colquhoun.  In the book of the exhibition it says; ‘…themes of grief seemed to come naturally to Colquhoun.  The mustard-yellows, browns and greens established a feeling of anguish, a sense reinforced by the scoring and scratching of the paint surface.’ (Elliott, 2014:33).

The Two Roberts, Robert Colquhoun & Robert MacBryde, Patrick Elliott, National Galleries of Scotland 2014

Project 3: Narrative

Think of a person for whom you have strong feelings or hold a strong opinion.  Find an object or item of clothing that reminds you of that person.  Make a piece of artwork that uses the object to provide the imagery but uses the materials to give the viewer a sense of the person.  In effect, you’re making a portrait of a person as an item of clothing…..  Experiment widely and produce as many pieces as you need to until you arrive at something which you think fits.

When I read this, I immediately thought of my mother, who passed away last year.  I don’t have any of her clothing, but I have some belongings.  I decided to do a still life with some of her things that were normally at her bedside; a china bowel usually filled with boiled sweets, her watch, a vase of roses and a bottle of Irn Bru.  I decided to go off track from the brief slightly, and instead of describing my mother, I would try to describe my feelings towards her, i.e. grief, love, sadness etc.

I was thinking of doing a still life with things that remind me of my Mum.  I put a vase of roses next to a bottle of Irn Bru (which she was never without), and did a loose pen and wash sketch.  I wanted the colours to be sombre, so used Indigo in the back ground, and used lots of water so that the black ink of the drawing ran into the colours.

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I struggled with the Irn Bru bottle a little, so had another go on its own this time.  I even tried a wash with Irn Bru, but disappointingly it disappeared completely.

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I’m also enjoying drawing the roses so have been experimenting with those too.

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The bowl was used by my mum as a sweetie bowl, so gave that a try too.

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I kept being drawn to the china bowl, as it reminds me so much of her, so I started another sketch of it on its own.

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This was done with a cheap black fibre tip that is water-soluble.

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To this I added watercolour washes with lots of water added, so that the paint ran down the paper.  I wanted to convey sadness and tears.  To test the success of this I posted it on the Facebook page OCA Sketchbooks and asked what mood or emotion it conveyed.   The responses I got were; sad, under the weather, sadness and lamenting, sad and gloomy, passage of time, very feminine + very emotionally depicted without over sentimentality, sad and lost, sadness, loss, faded memories and tears of grief, reminds me of Chinese or Japanese style, grief, inquiring, decorative, the runs are like tears and the colours are sombre so I immediately thought of weeping and sadness, you have conveyed the emotion in an effective (and affecting) way, sad, melancholy, weepy, really sad, nostalgia the sad kind. 

This is exactly what I was attempting, so I decided to leave it at that; one simple drawing of one object, rendered in such a way that it conveys my feelings towards the person it belonged to.

 

Project 1:Space, depth and volume

Method; Cover a whole sheet of paper with charcoal so that you have a blank black rectangle.  Make a drawing from a subject of your choice by drawing into the charcoal using a rubber or selection of rubbers.  When you’ve worked into the charcoal for about an hour using just a rubber (depending on how fast you work), go back to your charcoal and begin to redraw in darker tones using the side of the charcoal.  Continue in this way using the rubber as a white to the charcoal’s black and develop the drawing until you’re happy with it.  Try to avoid using outlines – instead use sweeps of the rubber or the side of the charcoal to build up patches of tone.  If you do use an outline, look at the two neighbouring tones, decide which is the darker and then blend the outline into that one.  Bear in mind that as you move along the object’s silhouette, the relationships might change and the outline might switch allegiance.

I have never tried this technique before.  I decided to set up a small still life with apples and a jug.  I used an A3 sketchbook and only had thin vine charcoal so I used it on it’s side to cover the page.  I found it difficult to draw without lines at first.  Similar to the way I found it difficult to paint the first time I did it without drawing an image first.  I did have to correct it a few times, which was easy as you just cover the mistake with charcoal.  Here is my first attempt.

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And here is my second;

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I was frustrated that I wasn’t getting any mid tones, just very dark or white, so I went on to You Tube and watched a tutorial, and quickly found that it was because I wasn’t blending the charcoal; just putting it on and taking it off again.

For my third attempt I set up a more challenging still life with a jug of white tulips, an apple and two patterned scarfs.

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I used a heavier weight of cartridge paper this time, and at first was a bit dismayed to realise it had a tooth to it, so the white came through when I put the charcoal on.  This time I blended the whole page of charcoal with a cotton wool pad.  I then took out the lightest areas with the putty rubber, again finding it tricky without drawing the whole composition in with lines.  I had to keep making corrections by covering it again in charcoal. I continued lifting out with the rubber and adding with the charcoal.  For the patterned scarfs I just simplified the design, implying shapes with the rubber.  I spent quite a long time on this and then left it to the next day to finish.  It is extremely messy work, and when I went to start the next day I found my cat had walked across the page!  Never one to miss an opportunity, I took some photos of her charcoal paw prints across the white desk to use in a later exercise; Found images.

I kept working, adding, taking away and correcting, and found it took a lot of patience to get a finished piece I was happy with.

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I am happy with this result and when I posted it on OCA Sketchbooks on Facebook, one of my fellow students commented that it had the look of a Scottish Colourists about it, which I was obviously pleased about.

Project 4: The human form

Make a drawing of two combined body parts.  This might be two feet crossed over, folded arms or a hand resting on a waist.  Look at the curves and the rhythms set up by those curves.  Look at the muscles and bones under the skin and the tension and energy they give.

I decided, through lack of a model, to draw my own legs crossed at the ankles.  I set up a lamp to help add more dramatic tones.  I also put a white sheet of paper on the floor to take away any distraction from the flooring etc. 2015-03-02 19.59.55 (2) A3 charcoal drawing

Doing my first attempt, I felt a little rusty and thought about how it has been since I tried any life drawing.  I think I achieved good chiaroscuro, but the leg and foot don’t have very realistic form and you can’t see evidence of bone or muscle in the legs.  Originally, I had wanted to try other compositions, with crossed hands and arms, and I did get my daughter to take some photographs for me but I couldn’t get a good enough photograph, so I decided to carry on drawing my legs.

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My second attempt was better,  there is better drawing of the muscle and bone.  I also tied using a putty rubber in this one for the lighter areas and I think this worked well.  The composition is much better too by making it a square, however the white paper showing the unfinished part lets it down.

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A3 charcoal drawing

I did a third and final attempt and I think the proportions are better in this one, it has good form and somehow the skin looks more flesh like.  There is good use of chiaroscuro, my only criticism is the proportions of the toes are wrong and they appear too long.  Other than that, I’m happy with it.

Reflection:  How far does your drawing direct the viewers gaze?  Did you manage to retain the tension in the limbs – or do they seem a bit floppy and directionless?  Have you managed to add an extra dimension to what  could otherwise be a technical or academic exercise?

I think I have achieved a good composition and the viewer’s eyes are directed into the composition.  I think I could probably have experimented a bit more by perhaps including more of the legs and used foreshortening.  I think I did retain the tension in the limbs and I don’t think it looks simply like a technical exercise.